Do you ever wonder if people THINK before they write an email? Take a look at this one below – this guys WAS (operative word here) applying for a job with our firm, yet we’ve never spoken, met or know anything about the value-add he could bring.

—–Original Message—–
Sent: Friday, June 08, 2007 10:43 AM
Subject: Sales Position…

Good Morning David,

 

After further reviewing your website, I have become even more interested in the idea of “Relationship Economics.” I had my second interview with XYZ company yesterday afternoon; it went extremely well. But I do not want to rule out the possibility of learning about the opportunity that may be available with your company.

Since I am interested in your message and theories, I would like to make a direct proposition. If you can match the XYZ Company offer and bring me onboard within the next month, I will gladly turn down their offer. If you all are not in the position to offer me a start date within a month, I will have to turn down any offer that you may make for future employment.

Thank you in advance for the courtesy of your response, and have a great day.